1. Is your thesis clearly affirmed at the
beginning of the paper?
2. Is your thesis
narrow enough for a paper of this
length?
3. Is your thesis
realistically interesting or original?
4. Have you incorporated
sufficient evidence to convince someone who disagrees with you?
5. Have you
chosen your proof or evidence cautiously and elaborated how it
proves your point?
6. Have you projected
and answered smart questions and objections to your idea?
7. Have you avoided
measly summary? (unless your tutor has specifically asked for a one)
8. Have you used
quotations with heed? (Too many quotations seem like stuffing. Extremely
few on the other hand may give the impression you have done no reading on the
subject.)
9. Are your paraphrases
really your own words and technique of writing? (Do they resonance like the
rest of your paper?)